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12 years ago
12 comments:
I am trying to find a really good book to read right now but can't seem to find any that are interesting. Any suggestions?
Yes, there is a good book that I would like to recommend the book The Dark is Rising by Susan Cooper.
It's a great book - even to Kirkus Reviews!
I just got done reading heart beat and now id on't know what to read.Any suggestions?
I need help on my poem and some descriptive words about soccer
I think that Anonymous should read The Clique by Lisi Harrison. It is an awesome book it is a series I am on the 4th one. Once you read the first one you will want to read all of them they are awesome.
I recommend the Warriors series by Erin Hunter. The first book is called Into the Wild and will have hooked in the very beginning. I love them and know you will too!
I've sent a comment about heart beat, and no one has responded:(
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Thanks for the comments jbd, and rkb:^)
If any one is looking for a book to read walk 2 moons is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo so so so so so so so so good and it's got lots of description and it's sort of a mystery.
I was wondering if you liked my piece:
"MIDNIGHT STREETS"
The midnight streets,
Are as dark as the bottomless sea.
The light of which blew out the night before.
As a hitchhiker adjusts
To the midnight streets,
The illumination starts to flicker as a glimmer of hope.
In the intervening time, in the clouds above,
An airliner glides in the starlit night.
Not a fragment of a trace,
Of how the people in the metropolitan below need a bit
Of cloud nine
As their hours of darkness escapes from their grasp.
In the sea below,
Existence goes by as it should.
Though it goes typical,
The places do necessitate a speck of optimism,
These places have no seventh heaven.
But there is hope.
-TAJ
As I started this piece, I knew there was hope for the people of every kind. Maybe there might not have seen like there was much hope for the city, but hopefully my poem left you with a sense of hope.
I worked hardest on the second paragraph trying to get the wording to fit properly into the piece and trying to make it sound as if I knew something – one thing, just one, about hope.
- TAJ
I'm having a dibbate between myself. I'm not sure I should make this shorter or leave it the way it is. This is for my reflective letter, to my Mom and Dad-
Last year I did not like to read, and this year I have grown to really enjoy it. Reading new books that i love encuraged me to use good discriptive language, like in the books that I read. i'v improved my language in my poetry, stories, and all my other writing peices. Mrs. Heim has ifluenced me as a reader and a writer. Mrs Heim has helped me find different genres of books that I enjoy. Mrs. Heim helped me find awesome verbs and really good discriptive adjetives. Mrs Heim has helped me come to realize that in my feature article or any other writing piece that I have to saticfy what my readers want in my piece. AVI has also inspired me, his quote" Don't write writing, write reading". That qoute also helped me become a better writer. It helped me realize if you write something you like the better it is, but I have to satisfy mywself, and the reader. I have to make sure my writing makes senseto me and my reader. That qoute means to write something your reader will enjoy and won't get confuesedor bored.
Mrs. H theres a lot of people that need help. I can help people that need a good book to read. If you need a good book to read, read Kensuke's Kingdom By: Micael Murporgo.It's a true story. It makes you really mad and really sad. Sometimes you'll hate and then in the next chapter you won't want to stop reading, and when Mrs. H makes us stop reading you'll be really mad at her. The first two chapters are kind of just about Micael's life as a kid. It's about a boy who's parents loose their jobs and they buy a boat. They go around the world and Micael's soccer ball falls off the boat in the middle of the night, then his dog Stella won't come away from the edge of the boat. The boat turns and Stella pulls Micael into the ocean the night before his birthday. I know I would hate that-being seperated from my parents the night before my birthday. But you'll have to read the book to find out what happens!!!
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